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All of them!!!
the pranks!! LOL, i found all of them funny
I dont have a fav member
yes i did
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ur style of writin makes u want to keep on readin, and thats really good
i really like ur site overall is really good. and r u gonna have a sequel to "pennies from heaven"?????? cause i really like this story, and i would love to find out what happens next to justin and lillian! =)
Mmmm .... I really don't know what was my favorite chapter, I just loved them all!! It was a great story and I liked that it was updated often, plus I loved the plot.
I really don't have one, I was laughing out loud so much, people must've thought I was crazy from all that I laughed!!!
My favorite member is probably JC, but I'm not obsessed so I really don't know what he's like, although the story did focus on all the guys instead of just Justin.
Yeah ... I really didn't read them much but I've always loved quotes and learning from them and adapting them to my life.
Not really ... great story, updated constantly, all I ask!
I really don't know ...
Well, I think I've said it a couple of times, LOL, I loved the plot, I love the way it made me laugh and how you made them sound as if you were actually there!
My favorite chapter was when Justin and Lillian fought in the rain. I always love the chapters where the characters' true love is revealed! lol Those are the best! But I also liked the ones in the beginning when Justin was such a jerk. Those were good, too.
Oh my gosh! I have to pick one? I can't decide! Most of the scenes with Joey and Chris were hysterical.
Mine is definitely Justin, as you can see from my email address. Not that I know Justin personally or anything, but I would say you did.
To be honest, I usually didn't read them. I'm sure they were relevant to the chapter, but I usually just skipped right to the good stuff so to speak.
Ok, although I liked the argument in the rain, it was a little cheesy. And then after they kissed and professed their love for one another, it stopped raining. I thought that was even cheesier. But as a whole, I thought it was a great story and very well written.
Well good grammar is always a plus, and you seemed to have that down pretty well. I have read so many stories where the dialogue is weak, and nothing is correct in terms of spelling and grammar. I thought the story was quite good, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I LOVED this story, and I can't wait to read more from you in the future. I thought the characters were great. Especially Joey and Chris. That is exactly how I picture them. The website is good as far as reading the stories, but I would maybe add some more graphics and pictures. Maybe create a picture of what you think Lillian looks like. I thought it was good that the main character wasn't drop dead goregeous, but was cute and had a good personality. It was a different kind of story. I give it two thumbs up!
It's so hard to choose!!! Probably the one when Justin kissed Lillian in the club. Even though he was drunk and they were arguing, it was a perfect moment that eventually lead the them getting together in the end.
There are too many to choose!!! I swear, almost every chapter had me laughing whether it was from the pranks that Chris and Lance pulled on Justin and Lillian (and vice versa) or the stupid antics of all the guys. You totally captured their personalities and knew when to provide comic relief that was absolutely hilarious!
JC is my favorite member and I think you did an awesome job- he is so serious but has his dorky moments. Plus I liked the whole "big sister" thing- I think he is probably a totally caring and thoughtfull guy like that in real life. He would be an awesome older brother! And I have to comment on all the other guys too!!! I loved how you portrayed Lance as such a great friend- but you also showed a funny side of him that I'm sure he has. Paired up with Chris I'm sure he gets into a lot of trouble. You did such an awesome job with Chris's personality! We all see him on TV and he just never stops- you totally captured his sarcasm and stupid sense of humor. I was laughing outloud at so many times during the story. I loved how Joey was like a big teddy bear- a horny/crazy one at that! I usually imagine him and Chris goofing off together but I kinda liked how he was the butt of Chris's jokes a lot. And he was so sweet with Lillian- although who knows if he could really give some valuable fashion advice- I'm not so sure about that! :) And I think that you portrayed Justin beautifully. There are so many times when I think of him as a cocky bastard- just like Lillian did at first- but then you can also tell that there's that really reserved, private, serious side to him. That conversation that he and Lillian had on the tour bus really showed that even the one and only Justin Timberlake has insecurities and is human like the rest of us. And I'm sure that he is just as stubborn as you made him out to be in real life! I was waiting and waiting for him to finally admit to himself that he loved Lillian!
Yeah- they were very ecclectic and always had a great meaning behind them to go with the story.
I read most of the story after receiving it through a yahoo group (can't remember which one- sorry) and I sometimes forgot what had happened in the past chapter. It would be awesome to have just a paragraph or so of the last chapter when you send new ones- that always refreshes my memory.
You are an absolutely amazingly talented writer!! I read A LOT of fan fic and it takes a good story line and a very good writer to get me hooked on a story. There are so many mediocre writers/stories out there and most are a waste of time. But not this story- you have a way of bringing the guys and other characters to life in such a realistic and interesting way. You describe actions and feelings so vividly that I could totally relate to everything you wanted to convey. I was always waiting for the next chapter so I could live through Lillian and her relationships with the guys. You did a wonderful job with the plot- I was waiting and waiting for something to happen between Justin and Lillian- and there was never a dull moment. When things did happen between them whether it was friendship, pulling pranks together, fighting, making up, or finally realizing they were in love, it was always at just the right time in the story.
I didn't really get a chance to look around the website, but I did notice that you have started a JC story. I CANNOT wait for that!!! Are you sending it out to lists or just updating your site? Again, you are so incredibly talented. This story had it all- there were times when I wanted to cry and other times when I was laughing out loud. It was just awesome! I'm gonna miss reading about Lillian and all the guys!!
My favorite chapter was probally the one where Justin got drunk and kissed Lillian. (Sorry! I can't remember the exact number.)
Umm..when they pulled the prank on Lance.
Justin would be my fav, and I think you did a pretty good job....I like the way you portrayed Joey and Lance especially.
Yes! I thought it sort of gave a feel for what the chapter to come was going to be like.
Nope. lol.
Um, I think maybe you could have expanded on Lillian and Justins' realtionship. Like showed them getting to know eachother better...more intimate moments(Not so much in a physical sense. heh heh.)
I think your website is great! I like that you update often..and the layout is cool. Pennies is one of my favorite stories..so great job!
I don't really have one...I loved all of them...hmmm...but, I guess if I had to choose I would pick the one with the squirt gun fight...that was cute..the last one was cute too though!
blah, same problem as before...there were too many funny scenes to pick one!!! I think that's why I loved this story so much!
Lance, and yes you did a great job!!!
yes! I like how you used ones that weren't your typical pop songs either. It mixed things up a bit!
nope...maybe that the chapters came out to slow at the beginning but by the end they came fast enough! :-)
um, best; really capturing the charaters and scenes...worst; not enough detail..just small ones...nothing too bad
I just wanted to say how much I truly loved this story from the start. It was different from so many stories that I had been reading and because of that it really stuck out in my mind. You're such a talented writer..don't let that talent go to waste! :-)
I can't pick a favourite chapter. I liked 20 because it was just too damn funny - the bodyguards at the end, "We da men" - I was trying not to fall off my chair from laughter cuz my brother was in the room. Oh, I also liked the last chapter, or was it second to last, when Justin and Lillian finally got together. It was just too cute - the whole princess/prince thing working out for them in the end.
My favourite scene was definitely the water fight. Like I said in the previous comment, I was having troubles keeping myself composed. But I also liked all the scenes when you described the pranks pulled.
I don't really have a favourite member or *N Sync. If I had to choose right now, it would most likely be Lance. And personally, I think you captured his personality well, taking it beyond what is always projected through the media to the public.
Yeah, I thought it was cute, although to be honest, I didn't always read them.
Hmm, not that I can think of right now. Maybe it's because I just stayed up until 3:43 in the morning to read the story....
One of your best qualities in my opinion is the dialogue you have between characters. It's interesting and believable - like it's something you could see yourself saying. I can't think of a worst quality right now, I'll get back to you on that one.
Well, I just read this one story, and I loved it - read the entire thing in one sitting and I know I'm going to have a sore neck/back tomorrow. I loved the characters - it's always nice to see that one of the guys isn't going to end up with the beauty queen that just happened to walk off the street, ya know? Lillian was real - a good character with a lot of passion used to write/create her.
I can't pick a certain chapter to like. I liked them all! The whole story was great as a whole! If you left out one chapter it just wouldn't have had the same effect.
I liked all the pranks that you had them all play on each other.
I like Lance....yes
I really liked them. It sorta gave a glimps of what was going to take place or what emotions were going to take place
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I really like how you go into detail about the important stuff and not as much about the other stuff. I like how you include little details to make us feel like we are closer to the story. I like how you didn't have one problem through out the whole story, but a bunch of little ones, and how you didn't solve all of them all at once.
Pretty much everything I said up there all put together. You did a really good job of capturing all the different sides of each of the guys. You didn't portray them as "perfect angels" but in order to not portray them like that you didn't turn them into complete "bad boys" and a** holes. I really enjoyed the story as a whole. You website it good too. I like the way you have it laid out for your two different stories! Keep up the good writting and work on your website!
I don't know what chapter it was but ireally loved it when you had the guys on he road singing to Lillian. I thought that was really sweet. (Nat King Cole song)
There was so many senses, I really don't know. LoL....I think overall the whole thing was funny/cute/and well thought out.
Well, I'm not a HUGE Nsync fan...but when I was JC was my favorite, and after reading a lot of these fan fics Justin is realy starting to get my vote too, I think you did a great jpb of them.
I loved that and I thought that it was a great idea. Some of those were really nice too. I really enjoyed them.
nope ;o)
Best: diffently your sdtyle of wrting and your great use of words. You also make everything funny, and you made sure that every one of the guys was included enough times.
I give you a 10~! hehe ;o*
I don't know what chapter it was but ireally loved it when you had the guys on he road singing to Lillian. I thought that was really sweet. (Nat King Cole song)
There was so many senses, I really don't know. LoL....I think overall the whole thing was funny/cute/and well thought out.
Well, I'm not a HUGE Nsync fan...but when I was JC was my favorite, and after reading a lot of these fan fics Justin is realy starting to get my vote too, I think you did a great jpb of them.
I loved that and I thought that it was a great idea. Some of those were really nice too. I really enjoyed them.
nope ;o)
Best: diffently your sdtyle of wrting and your great use of words. You also make everything funny, and you made sure that every one of the guys was included enough times.
I give you a 10~! hehe ;o* Whenever you start a new story, please email and tell me about it, I'd love to read another one...laters!
The ending because like Lily in the story I'm a Disney fanatic and a sucker for those happy endings :O)!
Probably when JC and Lily are in the mom-and-pop diner and he says the comment about big sisters out loud.
I actually don't have a favorite member, (hey with five men like that why do I have to choose?) but the reason I like to read fan fictions like yours is because you take the hints that we are given about their personalities and develop them into believable characters.
Yes!
NO!
You took the time to develop the relationships between Lily and the guys, I appreciate that as a reader, it makes everything make so much more sense
Well, I've only read the one story so far, but I like your website and I'll definitely be checking back in the future. Take care!
Um they all were. Serously. I mean it was all just so great. I liked how it was funny, sad, descriptive and just all around good. You wrote the characters so well. It made me feel like I actually knew. Like they were me or one of my friends. Do good job and keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more of your work and I have recommened you to some of my friends.
Man funniest moment. That would be a hard one. I mean there were so many that I just loved. Um the prank scenes were pretty funny. I really liked the scene where they all ended up in the pool after having a massive water fight in a four star hotel. That was cool. I'd really like to do that some time.
Um well recently my favorite changes moment to moment. So, I have to say that you did a great job capturing all of them and their personalities very well. Especially Justin. I really liked how you portrayed him. Made him my favorite for the moment.
To tell you the truth most of the time I just skipped them. I was more into reading more of the story and finding out what happend next. The ones that I did happen to read were really good and I liked them.
Nope. Well only that it wasn't longer. Hope about a sequel? You know focus more on another one of the guys and their relationship, but make it a continueation of this one. Don't know just and idea.
Um the way you draw the characters is defiantly a best and as for worst, there really isn't anything that I can complain about. I really liked the story and would like to read more by you. And if I thought that you stunk I would be truthful and tell you. But you don't stink so I am not lieing.
The site looks cool. To tell you the truth I just went straight to the fiction and got caught up in that. I loved the characters and the way that you drew them. Also, the way that you made them seem so real. You reminded me that all famous people are more than just movie, or music stars, they are also real people with emotions, wants and needs. So good work and I can't wait to read more.
I loved the last 'real' chapter, for the obvious reasons. It was so sweet!
There were a lot of them, I think the water gun fight was pretty funny
I love them all, and you definitely captured them great!
Eh, I always kind of skim over those. Sorry!
Well I was kind of hoping for a Lily/Lance thing for awhile, but I got over it ;)
You really catured their personalities, and kept them constant through the whole thing, which you don't see a lot of. I cna't really think of anything bad, I loved the story
Great! I loved it!
oh gosh...i really don't have like a favorite chapter they were really good..i guess u could say the chapter justin and lilian were on top of the bus that was really cute..i don't know i really know
the water fight scene..that was a classic!!!
my favorite is lance..and i actually think that u did capture him..since i'm sure u don't really know him.u did a good job with his personalty
yeah actually i did..i've never read a story that did that before..i enjoyed those..and i even wrote some of them down!!
not really!! this story is very good..and well written
you really know how to describe a situation and u really captured like all the guys personalites!! you are a very talented writer!!
i've only read pennies..and i'm glad i did....the story is really good and i enjoyed it!! i even lost sleep cuz i stayed up tell like 3 in the morning reading it cuz i got into it...i really like the lilian character..u did a good job on her..good luck on future stories and on the site..take cares..stay *nsync and god bless
It's hard to pinpoint exactly - I liked all of it.
There were a lot of great jokes where I just couldn't stop myself from laughing.
I think Justin is my favorite but I don't know if you captured his personality well because I don't know him so your guess is as good as mine.
Yes, I thought they really added some depth to the story.
Perhaps the beginning was a little too long - you drew out their relationship a little too long, but other than that i don't think so.
You have a very interesting way of writing, I can't explain it but just say that it is exciting to read, certainly never a boring moment.
Not much to say except thank you for letting me into your world.
I liked the ending of the story cause it was so cute!
I thought the watergun fight was SOOOO funny!
Justin and yes
yeah
no
I dunno.... I just liked the whole story. You made me kinda feel like i was there.
I think it was a terrific story...I liked it a lot!
I liked the chapter where...um... she tells Justin like about himself, that wuz cool
When she was at the concert, and the girl with the pick up line sign, that was so funny
JC!! Yeah Jc is totally a big sis figure.
They were cool, i knew most of them. so proud of myself!
Um..the sense of time, like how long they had known Lillian, was kinda weird. I didn't really know how long it had been.
Description is cool. Um worst, i dont really know
I like yur website. It's pretty (dont i sound dumb?) The stories are cool. I cant wait to read more of prelude to a kiss. Hannah reminds me of my friend, named Hannah, lol, she just seems like her
ummmmm....Chapter 32! Because Justin and Lily finally got togother!
The water gun scene!
Lance and you did a GREAT job on his personlity!
Yes I did!
I have none!
That's a hard one! Your best is that you made this story so real! Worst? None!
This is a great website and I have just finished "Pennies From Heaven".
Justin, and Lillin, I liked Lillin becuase she is a lot like me, and I liked Justin because he is my favoret Nsyncer.
When Justin and Lillin pulled the prank on Lance with the soda
Justin, at first it didn't, but after him and Lillin started getting along it did.
yes
no, It was a great story
none
I loved the story it was great
ahh i loved em all. i liked the end tho.
err...probably the sprite lol
justin and chris. yeah, i think u did. chris was too funny. justin pissed me off a lot lol but it was cool!
yep
that justin was such an ass lol
i loved it! totally awesome story ;o)
I can't choose a favorite chapter. The whole story was absolutely fantastic
Definetly the end with the blow up dolls. That was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing. Then Joey taking them. Woah!
JC and you definitley captured him
They were so cute
none at all.
I can't pinpoint exactly what I love but everything about the story was great. I really can't complain about your writing.
The story was fantastic. I cried reading the letters Lillian wrote to the guys. It was funny, serious, sad, and full of drama. I loved it.
I liked the last few chapters, it tied up all the loose ends in the story and it also had a happy ending and I'm a sucker for those.
I really enjoyed how you had the whole prank thing going on, the "L and J Connection", those scenes were always funny. Especially the water fight one in the hotel. I also liked in the last chapter when they were watching the Sound of Music, that was pretty good too.
I don't really have a fave member of 'NSync. Up until a few weeks ago they were just a band who had good music that I danced to, but a friend of mine sent me some fanfic and now it's become an obsession. :) So from what I've read and researched about them so far, your story definitely matches their personalities.
I loved the fact that you used quotes at the beginning of each chapter. I started to look forward to what the next one would be.
Absolutely none at all.
Best - you have a flair for making people fall into the story. I started reading and couldn't stop, you're a captivating writer and you describe things with just the right amount of detail and you don't go overboard.
I haven't actually checked out too much of the website yet. But I'll be sure to do that now. The story was great and I'm definitely interested in reading more of your stories. Your characters were really good in this story too, I felt like I could relate to Lillian at certain points and you made them seem so real and lifelike. It was a great story. Keep up the good writing.
well umm im not sure i think when justin and lily were on the roof of the bus looking into the sky i thought that was really sweet and i thought it was really funny how they locked the guys out of the bus.
um.. when they had the huge water fight and uh theres this other part that made me laugh alot but i cant remember let me look for it ok i finally found it and i was laughing soo much when lily is at the airport and like joey and lance are talking to her and lance calls joey tyrone and joey calls lance gaylord and that cracked me up soooo much!! lol love that part
justin is my faV member thats why i read the story. lol yea i guess you did im not sure but yea sure why not
yea
love the story and it is really really funny and i am going to tell my friends to read it too
best is how funny u make it and for worst cant think of any
i really love the story spent most of my day reading it cuz i coldnt stop reading it till it was the end love it very much soo very funny. lol right more stories of justin and when u do adn they r done tell me ples. i would love to read them! love the story i really do.
my favorite chapter was 32 because it was were justin and lillian got together i thought it was cute
Justin and i think u captured him really well
yeah cuz it summarized what was goin to happen or it went with the mood of the chapter
nope
i thought the story was awesome
my favorite chapter was thirty because i was waiting so long for lily and juct to hook up and in that chapter they did
i love them all but if i could only marry ont it would be justin because he is my age
yes
i thoght the story was great but i want a squel
rour a grate writer but i think the same problem was to long
I can't really pick a favorite chapter. I liked 'em all!
I kinda liked the water fight. I also liked the video tape credits. haha. There were a lot of funny moments.
My favorite memebers in nsync are Chris and Lance. I think you did a great job with 'em.
Yeah1 That was really kewl. That's a great idea. They fit the chapters well too.
Nope
I liked how you used moments that could happen in real life like that. It wasn't fake. No offense, but I had a hard time going through all those chapters. It wouldn't have worked without them though!
I really liked the story. I can't stand sad endings. I love happy endings like that. Whenever I start a story i always have to finish it though! Otherwise I feel like I have to do it myself. Haha. I'm glad I got through your story. I really liked how you made them act like jerks at sometimes because it made it more realistic. Not like how in some stories they are perfect all the time. It's always hard for me to get through fight scenes though!I'm just one of those people. I have an nsync website too, but I could never write as great as you did. keep up the good work. Email me sometime if ya want. I could always use another email buddy. i don't have a lot! C ya. Silverchic
I can't really pick a favorite chapter. I liked 'em all!
I kinda liked the water fight. I also liked the video tape credits. haha. There were a lot of funny moments.
My favorite memebers in nsync are Chris and Lance. I think you did a great job with 'em.
Yeah1 That was really kewl. That's a great idea. They fit the chapters well too.
Nope
I liked how you used moments that could happen in real life like that. It wasn't fake. No offense, but I had a hard time going through all those chapters. It wouldn't have worked without them though!
I really liked the story. I can't stand sad endings. I love happy endings like that. Whenever I start a story i always have to finish it though! Otherwise I feel like I have to do it myself. Haha. I'm glad I got through your story. I really liked how you made them act like jerks at sometimes because it made it more realistic. Not like how in some stories they are perfect all the time. It's always hard for me to get through fight scenes though!I'm just one of those people. I have an nsync website too, but I could never write as great as you did. keep up the good work. Email me sometime if ya want. I could always use another email buddy. i don't have a lot! C ya. Silverchic
My favorite chapter was the last one because it came out to be a happy ending after all.
The funniest scene was when they were at the airport and chris was shouting kinky letter.
My favorite member of nsync is justin and i would say you did capture his personatity very well.
I loved them they related to the chapters very well.
Your a very good writer and don't ever stop writing.
I would say that your best quality as a writer is your not like the other fan fiction writers.Your stories sound realistic.
I don't know exactly what chapters have what...but i would have to say that one of my favorite parts has to be when Justin invites Lillian "upstairs" ...just because that's where he gets to know her a little better and she was comfortable enough to let him in...telling him about her past.
Oh jeeze... it seemed like almost every chapter had something funny in it...the things Chris and Joey would say..haha.. the trip to the airport to pick Lillian up...The way someone always managed to walk in when JC was going on about him being Lillian's 'big sis'... in the end with Joey walking off with the blow up dolls...ha... but funniest? i dont know...they were all great...i laughed quite a bit...loved it!
I would have to say Justin... and yes, i think you did very good with the way you portrayed all their personalities..not just Justins.
Yes, i actually did like the little quotes...that's the first time i've seen quotes being used before each chapter and not just in the begining of the story. it's cute.
Complaints? nah, not this time around...i didn't really find myself being dissapointed with anything
Umm... well i read fanfics so i can kind of get a break from reality for a coule hours...and you story helped.. i easily slipped into a different place when i was reading your story...umm i dont really know what else to type here...sorry
everythings great. i had been looking everywhere for some decent fanfics and thanks to you, i found it .... keep writing, your really good at it... but you obviously know that... or you wouldn't have posted the story. It was very funny...can't go wrong with that, now can you? nope! haha okay i think im gonna stop now...im gonna go see if you have anything else to read =) LATER
My fav. chapter was when Justin and Lilian finally said they loved eachother.
The pranks
Justin, and yes you did...well at the first i didnt like it very much since he was mean. but then he turned out to begood..so it was all good.
yea...it was cool.
i think you should make a sequel.
your best -you detailed everything really good. worst- there wasnt really a worst.
I think you did an excellent job on the story. this has been the best story yet..that i have read. Good job! and keep on writing.
I liked the part when Justin ran after her and reads the letter and they make up. It was soooo cute.
I think it was Chris said that JC had said he was playing with himself.
Justin and yes you did
Yes i did
no
That you can capture such great moments when you made them up.
it was all great!
i liked all of them
i dunno
ya
not really
no
they're all good
i luv ur site
my favorite chapter would have to be the chapters when she wrote the guys those letters...they were so sweet!!!...lol...keep up the good work it was a great story
umm...probally when they were having the water fight in the hotel that would be a sight to see!!
JUSTIN...lol....and lance...ya i think you capueret the personalities really well!!!
ya i did each one described what was to come in the chapter, i really liked it!!
umm...no but you should do a sequal to "Pennies from heaven"...like how lily and justin are doing and how the group is ...oh ya and i think lance and karen should hook up theres seem like there could be something between them!
the waya you describe the feelings behind what the charactors are saying
EXCELENT!!!very good job on the story...im about to read another story involving JC on your site so i cant wait...if its anything like this than it should be good..i'll be sure to pass this site on to my friens!!
my favorite chapter would have to be the chapters when she wrote the guys those letters...they were so sweet!!!...lol...keep up the good work it was a great story
umm...probally when they were having the water fight in the hotel that would be a sight to see!!
JUSTIN...lol....and lance...ya i think you capuerede the personalities really well!!!
ya i did each one described what was to come in the chapter, i really liked it!!
umm...no but you should do a sequal to "Pennies from heaven"...like how lily and justin are doing and how the group is ...oh ya and i think lance and karen should hook up theres seem like there could be something between them!
the waya you describe the feelings behind what the charactors are saying
EXCELENT!!!very good job on the story...im about to read another story involving JC on your site so i cant wait...if its anything like this than it should be good..i'll be sure to pass this site on to my friends!!
All of it was great! wouldn't change a thing.
I loved, absolutely loved, every bit of "movie night" and when all of them went clubbin. I also liked the blow-up dolls! Nice touch.
My favorite member is Justin, and I think you captivated his personality very well. Even when he was upset, you showed that "stars" do have bad days! You tainted him a little, which is nice.
Yes! I loved that!
No, not at all!
Your best qualitites is that you stick to a storyline, make it funny, make the charaters believeable and tainted just a little.
This is a great story, and you should definitly make a sequel! I love your website - so come to mine and get linked! https://www.angelfire.com/journal2/bscfan/
i really enjoyed chapter 32 when justin and lillian duked it out in the rain, it was romantic and well described
the funniest moment was the singing bear, that was priceless!
my favorite is jc and i think that you did a wonderful job of capturing his personality
yes, that was very unique
i think that you are a gifted writer and i hope that you continue to write in the future
everything was overall really good, i don't have time to really go into it right now but you did well w/ this story
I liked them all
Too many to name
Justin, and yea
yes
none, zip, nadda
you are good at capturing the readers attention and keeping ahold of it
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i can't just pick one. i like all of them to be honest.
i loved the pranks. chris/joey said a lot of funny things too, which also kept me wanting to read more!
I mostly like Justin, and yes, you did capture his personality well. you did a great jop capturing ALL of their personalities well.
yes, i did.
keep up the amazing work! your story left me not wanting to go to sleep at night because i wanted to finish reading it! it's really really good! i can't wait to read your other stuff!
i would have to say that your best qualities as a writer are portraying characters amazingly. also, for example, Lillian, you made her seem as though us girls could relate to her. not all of us have drop-dead gorgeous looks, lots of money, etc., and neither did Lillian, and therefore it made us, or in this case, me, able to relate to her a lot. as for your worst qualities, i would have to say that there aren't many. if i had to pick something, maybe that you might wanna draw out the suspense to different things....like Elaine, right away in the next chapter, they figured out who it was, but i still liked it!! also, about Lillian's feelings for Justin came about pretty quick, but like i said, either way, i loved it!
well, i've only read this one story so far, but i will be sure to let you know of it more when i check out everything! so far, it's really really good!
the one where Justin and Princess FINALLY GET TOGETHER
Blow up doll
Justin, yea
They were ok, I only read the first couple chapters after that I was too interested in finishing the story
Nope
You did a REALLY good job at captureing the guys personalities, but in the begining you made Lily out to be ugly as sin. then all of a sudden she was a pretty girl. I dont know it didnt make sense to me or my friend...
Othere than the lily thing, I think that this story was written 'crunkalisous
my favorite chapter was when justin busted into lances room to find him and lilly hugging and accused them of being together. i just liked to see justin get jeolous.
When they were watching the sound of music.
my favorite is JC. and yeah i think u should the whole fatherly figure and his willing to have fun too.
Yeah that was my favorite part.
well, i thought the title should have had something to do with dreams
best~you didnt draw everything out it was all interesting worst~their isnt any really
I loved when Justin read the letter Lily wrote to him right in front of her. But if I were Lily I would have read the letter myself because I know i would be way to shy to look at Justin's face.
When everyone was at the airport to pick up Lily.
My favorite memmber was Justin. I was a little turned off by him in the begining, but I feel in love with him all over again in the end!
I felt like i was Lily. great feeling considering!
You are very good at describibng scenes.
It took me a while to read this storie, but I am a huge romantic so i thought that it was wonderful!
I liked where she wrote all the letters to them just because I thought it was really sweet and sentimental
Definatley the water fight
Justin: definately
Awww yea.. I have to go back and read them again
not really... A Sequal
...
When Lillian and Justin FINALLY got together at the end.
The singing bear and the blow up dolls...to funny.
Chris and Joey. You really captured their personalities well. I can imagine them playin around like that.
Yeah...very clever.
the epilougue cuz it was funny and romantic
when the guys were saying this “Me neither. She’s not exactly the type of girl we usually go for in a friend. Especially not such a close friend. But I don’t know, I guess she surprised us all,” he shrugged. “Kind of like a diamond in the rough,” Lance mused. “I didn’t think I would be getting in so deep either, when I first met her.” “Diamond in the rough?” Joey laughed. “You’ve been watching way too many Disney movies. Why don’t you get on your magic carpet and see a whole new world?” “Why don’t you make a wish upon a star for your life, because I’m gonna whistle while I work on fixing you a new face,” Lance retorted. Joey brushed his comment away with a chuckle. “Whatever, man. Whatever.”
JC. yes
very much so!
nope
you have nothing but great writing skills and i could never write a fanfiction story.
It was great keep writing!!!
allllllll of them!!!
all the pranks were rally good. you can't just pick out one.
Chris..and i personally think you hit it right on the money!!!
yup. they added a special touch to the entire vibe.
none
everything's awesome. One of my fav fan fic writers managed to dissapoint me using proper grammer in ALL situations thank you for NOT doing that
I seriously thought i would never find another good fan fiction sight. You managed to prove me wrong. I praise you in your ability to capture personalities as you did. I'm an aspiring writer but my over all developement in the writings aren't enough. There's not a single thing i could find in the story that i could grant dissapproval on. Congratulations. You moved the most cynical reader of all, lol.
I don't have a fav chapter. hmmm .i guess it's the one where they kiss.
all the pranks. the water fight was good. i liked the idea of joey trying to eat a box of donuts.
hell yeah . .they set the mood for the chapter. kinda let us know what to expect.
nope!
best is attention to detail. i only have positive things to say about this story.
great great great. photos would hvae been nice, but it didn't take away from the overall quality of the story. :)
Um, probably when they were standing in the rain at the end reading Lily's note to J. That was way sweet, when they told eachother that they loved one another.
Probably when they were having the water fight in the hotel.
JC and Justin are and yes you captured their personality very well,, you captured all of the guys' personalities very well
Yeah, that was way cool.
Lily was really cool and I loved this story! I even cried a few times, laughed out loud and wanted to scream
I don't think you have any bad ones, but you can really make me visualize this story and the events unfolding in the story.
I really liked this story, I haven't read any others ....YET...lol I like your site too.
Ummmmm I think the part where Justin and Lillian got together, it was great!
ummm there were A LOT!!! But I think I liked the part with the blowup dolls at the end...or maybe the hungry hippo's part....heehe can't decide!
Well I don't have a specific fav member, but I think you managed to capture all their personalities very well, especially Chris!
YES!! That was a good idea!
NONE U CRAZY!
ummmmm best qualities would be your description, and how your story wasn't predictable, thats always a good thing.
everything was great!
The epilogue because the story had a happy ending!
The water gun fight in the hotel. But I definitely caught myself laughing out loud at a lot of parts in the story!
Justin. I don't really know if you captured their personalities well because I don't know them but I would like to think that is how they would be if I did get to know them.
Yes, I loved them! It's a good addition to each chapter and also makes your fanfiction unique.
You are a very talented writer and I hope that you write many more stories. I know I will be checking back to this sight often.
The only thing I would like to see is a little more romantic scenes in the stories. (Not really a criticism, just a suggestion!)
I think the story was great, the characters were perfect. I hope you continue with your gift of writing.
I thought the whole story was good, actually. But the one that sticks out the most, is the one where Justin shows Lance the letter from Lily that he kept in his pocket. I thought that was sweet!
The funniest was probably ... all the different pranks actually.
Joey. Yeah, I think so, from what I know anyways.
Yes, I thought they fit pretty well with the chapter.
Nope, I thought it was awesome!
You're really good at getting people hooked on the story!
I thought the story line was great, it was pretty original. The characters were good. There was humor, drama, suspense everything that makes a story good. I thought it was great! I hope you keep writing.
I ddint have a favorite scene, i loved the whole thing!
THE BLOW UP DOLLS!!
Justin, i think you did a good job :)
yes
I think that there should be a squel, or a better epilogue, saying how their relationship worked out.
You captured the emotion well.
GREAT JOB!
Um, I don't really have a favorite chapeter, i thought it was all really great.
When Justin threw Lillians controller to the back of the bus and she started to throw beanie babies at him
In life, Justin, in the story it was a tie between Justin and Lance. And Yes, you captures their personalities very well
Actually, no offense, I didnt read them, I was too caught up in the story
nope!
I didn't see any bad qualities, you are a very talented writer
I think this was a very wonderful story, you're a great writer. This story is now on my list (along with 3 others) of the most captivating Nsync Stories Ive ever read. This was among the few where i couldn't wait to read the next chapter. Keep writing, and Im waiting for updates on Prelude To A Kiss!!
I didn't have a favorite. I think the story is awesome...keep writing!
Hmm...well maybe when they were having the H20 fight, and the bodyguards pushed them all in the H20.
I think Justin even though he acted stupid sometimes. You did a great job.
Yeah it's a nice touch.
Nada...wonderful!
Hmm...email me and I'll get back to you. I need time to give you a really good response :o)
You are a really good writer. I've wanted to be a writer since I was in the 4th grade and I like what I write but then I go read a story like Pennies from Heaven and it blows me away...love your stuff!
I didn't have a favorite cuz they're all good. I think the story is awesome...keep writing!
Hmm...well maybe when they were having the H20 fight, and the bodyguards pushed them all in the H20.
I think Justin even though he acted stupid sometimes. You did a great job.
Yeah it's a nice touch.
Nada...wonderful!
Hmm...email me and I'll get back to you. I need time to give you a really good response :o)
You are a really good writer. I've wanted to be a writer since I was in the 4th grade and I like what I write but then I go read a story like Pennies from Heaven and it blows me away...love your stuff!
I'm not sure I can choose one. I really loved the story, and enjoyed it overall. =)
LOTS of them lol...i dont remember exactly what it was but there were two instances were Joey said something which i was on the floor laughing so hard. =)
Justin. Well no one except someone who knows him personally can say if you did or didnt, but judging by how we SEE that he acts, yes i think you did a good job. =)
Yepppp loved em =)
ummmmm no i dont think so....not really =)
ahh dont put me on the spot lol jk...emm i duno i really liked the story and i dont really see any bad qualities that i could pin-point.
Love it =) im gonna go check out the site again now and see what else i can read or browse =)
The first couple of chapters because the reader got a chance to see a girl u don'y normally read about in stories and see Justin's reaction to her. It's ironic that the most hurtful parts of the story are my favourite but as i said the scenes are different from other stories.
The ending, where Justin and Lilly are on the grass and lance and JC are leaving and they start imitating the Justin and lilly acting all lovey dovey. that's some funny shit. And of course the water fight scence was hilarious and very fun.
Justin is my favourite for obvious reasons. I think he could have had more dialogue in the story to really capture his personality. However u did a good job of capturting all their personalitis based on the circumstances of u never having a relationship with them.but i think u did the best with Joey
Yes very much! i thought it was very original and a good introduction to the stories
Not much, except some parts were a bit boring and the other guys seemed too happy all the time. The fact thet the story does'nt really have much characters.
Your writing is good overall but i've read tons of stories and yours is one of the few that i've read to the end. It's kinda cheesy but most NSYNC stories are like that. I really like how u make the story fun and into a cmedy and u get straight to the point and not let the main characters think too much like other stories.
it was kinda annoying that they only became a couple in the end. That's it. Overall it was a realistic story with ( meaning, the main charcter is typical is is not skinny with long blonde hair) i really like that. I liked it alot
I can't pick just one, they were all great. They each had their special moments in them so I pick all of them!
There were so many! I found myself laughing out loud so many times I had to keep quiet or my family would think I was insane.
Justin is and yes you did. I think you captured all their personalities well. Great job.
Yeah I think they really sort of helped set the mood for the chapter.
None!
Best-The ability to add small bits of humor in all the right places, along with creating realistic drama and problems that we have all faced before. Worst-I can't think of anything bad to say!
This is the first thing I've checked out on the site so far but I'll be sure to look at everything else!
The last chapter because i'm a romantic sap like that and loved how Justin and Lily confessed their love to each other.
When Lace was making fun of Chris' mom .
Justin, i think you were almost exactly right on.
Yeah, they were very creative.
Instead of having so many chapters, make each chapter longer so more action takes place in each chapter.
Best: incorporating humor and drama to give the story balance Worst: not enough descriptions of characters
I really liked chapter 32 because it's when lilly and justin worked out everything and resolved it in a fight and I also liked the epilogue when lilly and justin planted blow up dolls in lance and chris's beds that was too funny. But to tell the truth I liked every chapter and the story was great. I loved it.
the funniest moment was when justin and lilly planted blow up dolls in lance and chris' beds LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!
favorite memeber is Justin u captured his personality well and all of his emotions. I loved how u did it. you did a great job
I loved all the quates it kinda told about each of the chapters loved it!!!!!!!!
no none whatsover!!!!!!!!!
best qoality was showing what everyone was feeling and it was like u were actually there or became one of the characters great job!
I love all the characters i think it's really cool to be able to think ^ something like this but this story was totally KooL!
I dont really remember wich chapter is but the one when all 4 members are singing her when she's ready to go home when she lost her intership that was one the sweetest thing you could have them say or give her.
the bond Lillian and justin made and how they played all those pranks to Lance and the other guys. And of couse the sister bond between her and Jc that was hilarious. =)
I Dont think I have a favorite but overall I think you really captured somehow in your way their personalities and I think you did a really good job at it.
Yes, I Thought they helped to understand somehow what you were trying to express in each and every chapter about how the characters were feeling and going through. I actually started to miss them in your second story on those chapters where you didn't put them.
Not really.. except maybe where is your page??! But overall I think you really are a great writer and I really enjoyed Pennies From Heaven and the other story the sequel to it,I think it was coming along great.
Like I said before I really think you are a great writer and I don't know but during the time between every chapter you had me like checking your page several times a day or in the week cause I was so hooked up with your stories.Your stories were of the very few i've considered my favorites.
Your site is great...I Love both your stories like I said before. I think the way you portrayed your characters was awesome they were simple but with so strong feelings that it made me so many times feel them. I really would like to know where is your page now.. or if your taking it down could you please send me your story I will apreciate it!!! thanks.
my fav chapter was 32 because it was soooo sweet!
the funniest was the blow-up dolls
Justin and yes.
Yes. I liked those
nope
I dint know. I liked your story though!
I liked the whole thing. (everything)
I like a lot of the chapters. I can't remember any particular one though.
Def. the end of the story where Lily and Justin had the singing telegram from Lance and Chris. Plus the blow up dolls
JC- I guess it did. Helping out in situations and being the "fatherly" figure or in Lily's case, "sisterly"
yes, they kinda described the feeling of the story
Your best qualities are describing the situations of certain scenes. Also, using each character a lot throughout the story.
I overall liked the whole thing. You used a wide variety of character traits that I liked to read about.
Well I didn't have a specific chapter that I liked but I liked the parts where you had them acting like normal people hanging out and also when you had the characters acting responsilbly with alcohol.
The funniest was when the guys would put each other down.
I love Lance, and yes I hope you did because I would imagine he would be caring and not judge on appearences.
I only read a few but yes those seemed to fit the chapters.
Well I was sad when Lily was disappointed by Justin but in the end it worked out.
Your best qualities are describing the characters and giving them personalities. Worst, well I'm not sure cause I liked the story!
Write more stories!!!!
I loved the whole thing! =0) It's a very well written story and you have a wonderful sense of humor! You totally captured the heart of how *N Sync really is! Kudos to you!
The scene with the blow~up dolls was a fave, as was most of the story.
Lance and JC. Yes, I feel you did a fine job with them.
Yes, they went very well with each chapter. Very nice idea =0)
Nope.
I can't think of any bad ones. Seriously, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. =0)
You are an excellent writer and I hope you continue with your talent. Keep up the great work!
Um i'd have to say my favorite chapter was chapter 32. i absolutely loved the ending! i cant think of a better one. you are an awesome writer! u have a talent. i hope u use it to ur best! good luck!
anything with Chris. he was so funny! all the repitions of words with double meanings...they were cute!
Justin is my favorite. I think u captured his personality extrodinarily! i loved the part where Lillian described him. i felt like i was sitting next to the real life Justin!
yes!
none!
i didnt see any bad qualities, but i loved how u kept the reader guessing as to what was going to happen!
I think the stories are excellent, u captured the characters wonderfully and the website is Perfect! congrats!
I absolutly loved when Justin and Lilly got together, i cant remeber what chapter it was but it was my favorite!!
The funniest moment had to be when she was telling justin the story about "gaylord" and "tyrone"..that was hilarous!
My favorite member is Lance and Justin. You captured them perfectly!!!
Yes, becuase you could kind of tell what kind of chapter it was going to be!
None!
I think you are an excellent writer, I felt like I knew them!
This is the first story i read so far on this website but I loved it!
I think my favorite chapter was the ine were Lily tells Justin how she doesn't think he's stupid. It shows her love for him without saying the words out loud.
When the guys trowed the beani babies "upstairs"
Lance and yes I think you captured their personalities just fine.
Yep, I even downloaded some of the songs.
No, the chapters were not too long which is always good.
You go to the plt so that's sometimes good and sometimes bad. For this story in particular, was a good approach.
Great organization in your site and I can't wait to start reading the sequel.
uhhh... when lilypad first met lance, and he and chris were playin in the elevator... thats such a guy thing... u did that scene really well... it helps that it had *Chris* in it tho... haha... it was all really awesome tho... adn really ironic that justin found luv cause chris insulted lance's mama... haha... but awesome job!!!
haha... i loved any scene wit chris, u jus made em all so funny!!! it was great!
Chris... definately, i loved the carefreeness u portrayed him with... i love to laugh, which is probably y i love him so much! cause hes a funny guy... haha...
yes, i loved em... they all fit the chapters well, and i downloaded the songs and listened to them during the chapter, adn it completely set the mood!
nope!!! that was an awesoem story, definately now one of my favorites!!! Good Job!!!
i love the way everything flows, and u know wuts goin on... and i luv ur style, its unique, and jus... i luv it!!!
i jus read this one story, but it was really good... the characters were done so well, when justin got jealous, adn elain's mean streak!!! u r an awesome writer! never ever give it up!
31, b/c justin and lily finally found out that they both loved each other!
when u were talking about the L and J pranks stuff the one where they shook a sprite bottle for a hour so it would spew all over lance and made him feek even worse b/c he had a headache to
justin timberlake, yes
yes
nope it was awesome
i dont think u really have any bad qualties but one of your good qualities is u make it feel like u were actually a part of the story like u where in it
all of it is awesome
The last chapter! Finally Lily and Justin got together! That was about to drive me nuts, little lady!
The guys watching the sound of music was great!
My favorite is a either JC or Justin. And I think you captured their personalities as well as the other guys wonderfully.
Yes I love them.
Yeah I wasn't in the story! J/K! But seriously no. It was all really good.
I really don't know I didn't notice any bad things. Your writing was very professional/
I loved 'Pennies From Heaven' and I am enjoying 'Prelude To A Kiss'! I can't wait for an update!
When Justin read the letter and said he loved her
all the pranks..i can't choose one, all of them. I loved the L and J thing thats tooo cute
JC is my fave member, you caputred it well, but you could have made him more interesting
yes! very much..i saved a few.
write a sequel..continue..make more chapters....please!
best: you know how to make each scene interesting and funny worst: you didn't expand on things as much as i would like you to
eveyrthing is great. i love lillian, and the story line is VERY cute, and its actually original.
Not sure actually.
Probably the watergun stuff.
Justin, couldn't tell ya for sure, we're not on an intimate basis :)
Yeah, that was a unique idea and I really like it.
Nope
You mix humor, sadness, and that gushy love feeling really well. You blended allpossible emotions in the story so that it didn't fit a perfect mold of a love story like most fanfic, and that makes you a unique writer which is an awesome plus. On the negative side I would like to read more descriptions, especially of characters like Liliane so you can picture in your head what she looks like.
I loved the story and I'm a sucker for happy endings. I thought it was adorable and I was wondering if Lily and Justin are together in the sequel?
All of them of course, I really love all of them
well when they are pulling some pranks and oh! the water battle in the hote hallway.
Um... JC and Lance, Um, I really don't know I don't the real them so I don't have any clue...
Yup, very emotional, and didecated
Nope, not at all.
You're best qualities as a writer is that you have some good grammar and expalain really well. Your worst qualities is not so many angs, well you know I like angs.
i love your stories its writes perfectly well, the characters is done theyre job good. You done a very very very interesting stories.
All of them of course, I really love all of them
well when they are pulling some pranks and oh! the water battle in the hotel hallway.
Um... JC and Lance, Um, I really don't know the real them so I don't have any clue...
Yup, very emotional, and didecated
Nope, not at all.
You're best qualities as a writer is that you have some good grammar and explain really well. Your worst qualities are not so many angs, well you know I like angs.
i love your stories its writes perfectly well, the characters is done theyre job good. You done a very very very interesting stories.
i didn't really have a fav chapter i had favourites scenes like the the flaskback scenes with justin and lillian they were cute.
The L and J connection scenes omg great and the scene when they were having a water fight but then got pushed in the pool by Loonie and Todd just classic. :)
i think i had a favourite thing in all of them .Joeys kindness towards lilly, Lance being the overprotective 'brother, Chris and his jokes, Jc and his random doppyness and Justin being the neieve 'friend.
YES GOOD QUOTES
NOPE not at all
you can really write a scene and make a reader feel like they are really there or are really that person for a short amount of time.
GREAT STORY 1 of the best i have read. I have read this abut 6 times and i still love it.
i liked the chapter with the pranks cause those are so great!! i also liked lance's birthday party, water fight!!
the end totally! and when j.c. said "bam? is that the sound of you runnung into a glass door?" pr something like that
i love them all and from what the media tells us that's what they'd be like to me
fucking a!!! those where awesome
ppppssssshhh! noo
i like how you made everything seem very lifelike
shibby!!!
they suk
you suck
you suck
I LOVED IT ALL!!
the scene where chris, justin, jc, and joey are playing hungry hippos... lol.. chris was so funny at that part!!
CHRIS... i definitely think so!
i really enjoyed reading each one
nope!
you have a good range of vocab, girl!
i really liked this story... it's a story i could read over and over again!
I can't really pick out a chapter because I loved them all.
The funniest moment out of the whole story was the ending with the blow up dolls. the L and J connection really pulled it off this time. Can't wait to read the sequle to it to find out more pranks!
I love all of the guys a lot. I think that you did capture them all very well in the story. Lily reminds me a lot of myself so it was actually kinda nice to read a fan fiction that I can relate to.
I didn't really pay attention to them. I was too busy with the story!
None whatsoever!!! Great story!
I think that you are a very talanted writer. Just when you're writing in chapters. Don't start one and then go to another one. If you have to, make the chapter extremely long.
the chapter at the MIT college campus and the rain...
Don't have one
JC....don't really have an answer
Yes, they fit the chapters well.
No, not really.
Don't really have an answer right now.
I love everything
the chapter at the MIT college campus and the rain...
Don't have one
JC....don't really have an answer
Yes, they fit the chapters well.
No, not really.
Don't really have an answer right now.
I love everything
i always like it when they finally get together!
when chris was telling justin to not say the woed "crunk" i also liked when they were playing hungry hungry hippos! that was so cute! lol!
justin most defnatly! you did so well!
i really didn't pay much atteion to them.
nope! none from me!
when you used the word crunk! when justin said " this tours is going to crunk!" it should have been "this tour is gong to be brunk!" thats the only thing that bothered me! dodn't hate! lol!
it was wonderful! you have alot of talent! you doing good gurl!!!
I loved it all. It really gets you hooked on the story line.
The blow up dolls.
Justin, from what i've seen yes.
yeah it really related to the chapter.
nope except the words were a bit small.
best: how you make every chapter have a new story line.
It is totally cool. Can't wait to read more.
my favorite part was towards the end because justin relized hed been an ass and went after her
Chris and Joey
I DONT LIKE NSYNC lol Busta is my favorite and hes not with us anymore RIP busters
The quotes were cute
=)
It was the chapter when Justin and Lillian were outside the stadium at MIT in the rain. When he read the letter out loud. I thought that was the best scene. Every girls fantasy of how it could be between a girl and boy. I loved it! :)
Whenever they played pranks on eachother. Those were great!
JC~and yah I thought you got his personality very well. Granted I dont know him but I liked him in this story.
Yes, I thought the quotes at the beginning of each chapter went very well with the story.
Nope :)
I dont have any complaints. I thought the story was very well written. You have talent.
I like your website I just wish the stories were updated a little sooner :) I mean I know you are busy and have a life, but I just like reading the sequel. lol.
definatley the last one! it had a happy ending!
all of the chris and joey bits!
justin, i wish i knew him to tell you. You made him out to be a funny and great guy though!
i did! it told me whether i was going to like the chapter or not!
none! it was seriously fantastic
u make a good plot(i can NEVER finish my stories), and errrrrrrmmm......jeez tough one.....maybe u should use more descriptions??? but it was fine really
it was a really funny, sweet, moving and entertaing story! btw you should write another justin story with the lance sub-plot thingy!!!!
my favorite chaper was when the guys headed back to MIT and justin and lily got together!
pretty much any time chris or joey had lines!
Justin-well i hope he is as nice as he was in the story!
yes even though i didnt know who some of the peolpe where !
nope. i really liked the fact you made lily normal looking and not a total glamor queen!!
i like the chapter when justin was insecure and lily sorta mapped out her feelings for him without actually telling him...that was really cute
the water gun fight in the hotel...the was really kewl, i wish i could do that!
justin is my favorite...i liked the way the you captured him although i dont really see him as the shy type who wont tell a girl his feelings
i think that it sorta gave an overview of the chapter although i have to admit that i didnt read all of them
no i really liked the story...although i was sorta hoping that the sequel would be about justin
i like that you arent really tennybopperish and your stories arent unrealistic
i like it...like it alot!!
I can't pick a favorite chapter, but the humor mixed in with the angsty drama was perfect!
There were so many cute little come-back lines between all the guys.. it's hard to choose just one!
JUstin is.. I think you captured a part of him that his fans could never really imagine or accept...the REAL side of him...
actually, yes I did, because they captured the mood of the chapters very well...
none, not a single complaint
you're a very talented writer actually, and I don't say that lightly, being a writer myself... in fact, I'd love to have you check out some of my fiction if you're interested! =)
Absolutely wonderful! =) Well done! I look forward to reading the sequel! Just not today, lol!
I can't decide, seriously. This is one of the best stories I have ever read!
I'm likin' the singing bear thing in the last chapter. That was great!
JC is my favorite. Yeah, you did a pretty good job in some aspects.
Yeah...those are great. You seem to do a lot of work!
None at all. Keep writing!
I happen to think that you are a very talented writer.
I really enjoyed the story. Lillian was a GREAT character. One that girls can relate easily too. She isn't the perfect model, but normal in her own little way. She's an everyday person. I just think you did a great job, and I want you to keep writing! Writers like you make readers like me happy people. :-)
Hmmmm... I can't really say that I have a favorite chapter. I liked so many of them for different reasons.
I liked the parts where Justin, Lillian, Lance, and Chris were playing pranks on one another. I also like the part about JC being Lillian's "big sis", and the parts were Joey is doing Chris's challenges.
Justin is my favorite member of *NSYNC. I think that you did a good job showing multiple personalities. After all, no one is perfect all the time, even Justin Timberlake!
Yeah, I thought the thoughts were cool. They sorta gave you an idea of what the mood of the chapter was gonna be.
Nope. :)
I think you did a great job giving a lot of details. It made it easy to picture what was going on. Plus, the story line was interesting and surprising, yet it was explained in a way that it wasn't confusing.
Overall, I think you did a great job! Personally, I think "Pennies From Heavon" is one of my favorite fan fic stories. Keep up the good work!
Lydia. She is really cool and so sweet!
i dunno the story was great!
justin and yes you did.
yup
nope
i can't complain. it was an awesome story overall
awesome site and really good stories you have here!
Hmm, i liked them all
im not sure
Justin, and yep.
Yes, omg i love those.
The ending was sort of of uh .. incomplete? lol but its okay.
well like with all the pranks you go into so much DETAIL and like for example at the end w/ the blow up dolls you made chris and lance sound kinda cheesy .. sorta
its great
Justin and Lilly, I'm glade they got together in the end
at the end when Lilly and Justin put blow up dolls in Chris' and Lance's beds and Joey took them!! That was awesome!!
Justin, yes, the way you did his personality was awesome!!
whichever one the water fight was in
the water fight, i could imagine my friends and i doing something like that which really brought reality to the story
Justin, and ya, i would say you did
uh, to be honest i read the first few but after that i kind of lost interest
is there a sequal? if not there should be....
capturing personalities
well, i haven't see your website because a friend sent me the url to the first page of the story and i just read the story. that was the only story of yours i have read but i am very interested to read more
I think....the chapter where the guys thought Lilian was sabotaging the tour and Justin screamed at Lilian. That and the chapter after that.
Can't really remember.
Lance. When you say Lance you get the idea of Momma's Boy so it's not really hard to capture their personality. Besides, if it wasn't for Lance, Lilian and Justin wouldn't be together.
It's okay....
The story isn't perfect but I have no major complaints.
Worst? You hardly update Prelude.
Erms.....6 and a half out of 10
It was great...only bad thing about it was that it had to end!...lol... you are very talanted...I only hope that I can finish my story and have it be as interesting as yours was...*smile*
all of the funny joles that chris or joey told were very funny
I love them all but truthfully my favorite is Justin....I think you did a great job with the personalities...although i don't know them personally..lol
yes
nope
your descriptiveness
I loved it...the end..lol
The last one or the ones with the pranks cuz they were so... well the pranks were kinda funny and the last one was when J realizes what hes been missing and blah blah blah... you know what goes on in that chapter.
The funnist had to be when Joey took those dolls and... who knows what he does with those... lol
My fav is Lance. Or Joey. I can't choose!... Anyways, I thought you did Joeys the best. Lance's was a little vague but it was mostly broad strokes so you can get the idea even if you don't know who Nsync is.
Yeah.. those song thingys were neato. :) lol. just to put in lame terms.
HECK NO!!
Best quality is using a lot of different words not commonly used in the everyday language. And you come up with these ideas and it all fits so perfectly, like Lily being an intern and meets Nsync. I mean it could happen... just not the hooking up with Justin part.
This website, the stories, the writing is all really good. The girl characters are kind of... nm... all of it is So good that I am speechless.(yeah right! lol.)
I don't have a favorite. They were all great.
I laughed so many times through this story but i think maybe the last scene was the funniest.
I don't have a favorite member but i think you captured all their personalities well. Except I don't think Joey is the player everyone thinks he is.
Yes, I thought they were pretty good and rather unique.
None.
You obviously have a sense of humor and I think a story without any humor is just boring. The insults and all the jokes you put in the story we very funny.
I thought this story was great. It's probably one of the best I've read and maybe one of the longest too.
Erm, can't remember! they're all hell good!!
i've read the story too often to think of just one!
I don't have a fave, but i think that's how i'd picture them all!
yeah..didnt even realise half of them existed, but hey!
nope!
lol, you're good at keeping the flow of the story and keeping the reader interested! conversation is also good between the characters and a plot line is definately there. the characters all have their own personalities and lilian is a great character cos she is so realistic
i do like the word "whoop" lol. that has nothing to do with anything, but just thought i'd ad it in ayway. oh! and please update the otehr story..am dying from suspence.
Favourite chapter was when Justin introduced Lilian to his "upstairs". It was really sweet to think that Justin needed a place somewhere that was just his, somewhere to get away from it all. Mad him seem more human, less like a celebrity.
All the pranks everybody was pulling on each other. And the water fighting scene in the hotel, with the two bodyguards getting their revenge in the end.
Justin is my fav, that's mainly why I started reading it. And in the beginning when he was so rude to Lily, I had my doubts about how well the story would turn out. But I stuck with it, and the way you potrayed Justin turned out exactly how I would want him to be.
Yeah, I did. Made me wanna download the songs off Kazza. Plus, I don't know of that many people that like the old songs, like Etta and that
None really.
The best quality would be that you know how to develop a character well. I was really able to see that Lily had developed from the shy girl into a more stronger woman in the story. Worst quality would be just be that in some scenes. there was unnecessary bits in the story. Kinda like it was really being panned out to where Justin and Liliy finally kissed. But it isn't really a bad thing to do this. Because it fit well with the characters anyway.
Just that the website is a little bare when you first see it. A lot of text and that's kinda it. That's all I can think of.
i have a small problem totally unrelated to this form. it seems that my isp is playing up thus i have lost all of the listings i had in my favorites list, as you know i love your stories and now i can not find you page. can you please email me your URL? im sorry for the bother
justin and yes i do think you did
love all the quotes you used on this story and
none
you are a very talented writer you draw your readers into the stories
the site is easy to use, clear, yhe stories you write and host are great
hmm...I would have to sya that my favorite chapter was when they were standing in the rain and finally told each other that they loved each other because it was so frustrating reading it because sometimes you just want to scream at them to admit what they are feeling and it is just always great to see (read) when they finally get together. I guess im just a sucker for a happy ending but you did a great job and i hope that you keep up the writing it is totally awesome.
the hungry hungry hippo scene that was just classic
Justin and i think that you did an awesome job with not only him but the rest of the guys as well.
Yes, but some of them didnt really seem to flow with the chapter very well. They were also kinda distracting because i wanted to read them and at the same time get on with the story if you know what i mean.
it could have had a little more action sequences mabe some more actual romance you know what i mean but other than that i have no complaints what so ever.
Best - you have really good flow to your writing worst - between some of the chapters it seemed like there were gaps that could have been filled in with great things.
this is the first story of yours that i have read but it was great. like i said before you are a very tallented author and i cant wait to read the sequel to this story as well as many more of your stories. i also think that you did a great job at capturing the personality of each one of the guys.
I'm not sure what chapter I liked. It is so hard to determine, but in every chapter there was a "scene' I liked.
The funniest moment was when they had a supersoaker water fight. When Lillian was chasing JC (I think) and Justin was chasing Joey, and they all ended up spraying one another.
My favorite Nsync member is Justin, obviously, or else I wouldn't have read the story much. I don't know if you captured his personality well, since I don't know him personally. But his personality and character was wonderful. Like the show "he had a change of heart".
I wasn't able to look at the quotes that much since I was eager to read the next chapters. But the first few that I did read was okay. It related to the chapter one way or another.
Is there a sequel? Lol.. I'm just kidding!
I'm not sure. I thought the story was great.
I'm a little confused about the epilogue. Were they chilling the day after the concert? Besides that, overall I thought it was a great story. You have a very creative mind, and hopefully you continue to put it to use. Not only was the story cute, it also relates to me. People judge me from what they see. Just like Lillian, she was judged at first glance/impression. Yes, she was quiet (like myself), yes she was insecure. But people should look past that and see the beauty within. In your story, you showed the reality of life, and by doing so, you made it a little realistic (except with the whole Nsync thing). I just want to thank you for writing a story that I enjoyed to read. Hopefully you continue to write more. Good Luck and Best Wishes!
they were all good. to good for me to choice just one!
every prank they did. expecaslly with the last 2 pranks. priceless.
justin, and jc and lance are the 2 runner ups. yes it was great.you hit their personalities perfect.
yes they help when having a bad day and gives you things to think about. keep wrighting stories and keep adding them.
no,
well im a wrighter 2, and i dont think you have any. their all good, just maybe when going to the next secshion, on some parts you need to add a lil more , to help understand things better.nothing big!
everythings great from what i saw and i was going to see if you can email me and tell me when your plainning on closing the 2 stories down. im about to start on the jc one and would like to finish it. about to start,when i get through sending this to you. Thanks for the dovoshion you are giving to the guys. at lest i know im not the only one who still cares for them! lolz
oh gosh, i loved it all, it was hillarious, but i think i liked the singing bear prank the best, i think that was like chapter 32 or 33.
ALL OF IT, that had to be one of the funniest stories i've ever read, most comedy stories end up being super cheezy or have THE stupidest plot ever. but yours was extremely good, not stupid or cheezy at all :)
i actually loved Joey and Chris. Usually i'd say justin :) but in this story Joey and Chris were so funny and light hearted but were still always there for Lilian as a friend too. I could totally imagine myself talking to them, they seemed real. You did an excelent job capturing their personalities.
yeah actually, usually lyrics or quotes in a story are kind of stupid and have to connection to the story plot, but this story did have a huge music vibe, they were always singing songs and bustin out with lyrics. the quotes on the chapters did work really well with the story and actually had somethign to DO with the chapters.
umm, not really...
your best quality would have to be the quick shots of humor that actually make the reader laugh out loud instead of smile. My parents probably thought i was crazy the way i was laughing so much at the computer. Your worst qulity? hmm maybe that there were to many small problems Justin and Lilian had, maybe there should have been one over all bad guy that way they weren't always fighing then making up, but it wasn't that big of a deal, i like the story just hte way it is.
i loved it all!!!!!! I havent checked yet but is there a sequel? (spelling?) that would rock so hard! lol anyways fantastic job and keep up the good work!
I enjoyed all the chapters truly.
OMW, I literally died laughing in front of my computer...the comments and the moments were absolutely hilarious...
Really, out of all the fan fics I have read you captured their personalities better than anyone else. They were what I would imagine them to truly be like.
I really liked them...
Nope
I would enjoy a non-offensive link to the story, as in a story with all the cussing edited out, that would really make the reading alot more enjoyable.
Everything is great! Would love to see visuals of the characters, but overall I love it all!
I don't know the exact chapternumber bu I like the one where justin and lily finally confess there love and kiss (when justin's not drunk)!!I loved that part!!!
:D the part where she sees the end of the video JC made and it says: producer: JC music:JC king of the world: JC .... I loved that!! Man that was sooooooo good!!!
Justin (typical I know). I think you did a pretty good job but he's not really very catchy. If you know what I mean.He doesn't figure things out vey easily.But still, it was good the way you did it.
yeah,I often wondered how the f*ck you came up with them!! some songs I knew and others I didn't. I was very surprised at how you find a fitting quote for each and every chapter!!very good!!!
It's just my opinion but I like would've liked it if they realised everything sooner,ya know? so they could like be lovers for a longer time, or go trough the tour as lovers. i would've liked that.But still I liked the story,don't forget that!!!
best --> your pranks and humorous things!! you got a GREAT sense of humor!! worse--> I don't know, maybe you tend to be a little too stalling. But it's just because I like a lovestory (with a happy end) and yours is one like that but the love comes at the end, ya know what I mean????
don't know yet. i've only read one story so far and that's this one and it was great!!! your site is easy so i love it 2. so far so good. :)
my favorite chapter had to be chapter's one and two. you completely set teh change of heart in justin throuhgout those scenes. the bond between lillian and justin has an amazing start and the chemistry just continues to grow.
the funniest parts were when the guys would say a different word for a sentence. especially the 'lance "oh"-' and 'jc's "shit"!' i don't think i stopped laughing.
i am what you call a constant. i like them all for different reasons that uniquiely complete me. and girl yes you completely captured their personalities.
yes, very individual. they also set the mood for the chapters very well.
none so far, i haven't read the sequal yet!
you have a great imagination, and it shines through your work, but also your characters need a little more background. no one really knows what happend to lily. all the chararcter's need a little bit more emotion, personal thoughts things like that.
as i said i haven't read the sequal yet but so far so good
after reading it for the 3rd time i love it all
i gotta say i love the blow up doll thing lol good thinking
i love jc but i'm leaning towards justin since i ain't met them i dunno but i like how u portrade them
yes i did good touch
nope
can't think of any atm
LOVE IT ALL GIRL U CAN WRITE SOME GOOD SHIT excuse my languagelol but if u ever need help when u get stuck writting or can't update (i know u rtakin a while with the sequal of this) just give me a shout! i'll be glad to help and i also have like 3 stories in the work if u want to read em check em out wateva!
oh man prolly towards the end when justin and lily were out outside the stadium..in the rain.. FINALLY hookin up!
wow there was alot. kept makin me smile!! but funniest is .. man this is hard, those times when L and J connection pulled pranks on lance n chris
JUSTIN!! yes of course! very well done.
umm.. i thought they were cute becoz it was kinda tellin us the mood of that chapter. and i DLed some of the songs too =D
NOOOOO! i loved it!!! i was almost late for skool becoz i didnt wanna stop readin it.
u add everything in a story. u can make the reader laugh and smile, cry and have them saying "awww" and u just did a great job!
everything was perfect. great job. and im afraid of readin the sequal b/c what if it doesnt come out as great as the first one and plus JC is the lead. =P but imma read it anyways. i love this story. very well put hun. (and i dont care if u wrote this ages ago.. hehe)
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when they finally got together...everyone altogether... "AWWWWWW!!!"
when joey lance and jc disguised themselves in the airport and the hungry hippo thing..lol
Jc...and yeah...definitely a chick..lol
yeah..they went with the chapters
NONE...zilch...zero....
ummm..best...you kinda got into the minds of nsync..characters were good...i dont think you have a bad quality
it was great! keep writing!
i don't remember the exact chapter, but it was when justin started to tolerate Lillian
i don't know there were quite a few and i liked all of them
Lance, i think so
i didn't really read a lot of them i was too interested in finding out what happened next that i kinda blew them off.
i didn't really like so much cursing in it. That might be how they really are, but you could of substituted some words.
your best quality is capturing the audience's attention, i stayed up til' 5:30 in the morning, and i only got to chapter 19, and i didn't want to go to bed, but seeing how long it took me to read it i'm glad i didn't stay up.
if i were you i'd change the guys' names and the name of the band and britney's then get it published.
the part were justin is mad and is acting normal.
the end when justin pulled a prank on chris and lance.
justin the begining yea end no
no i did'nt get it
i think u should make justin act mad and grumpy and happy sumtimes and more suspense stories with justin plz.
worst not anuf heartbreak or thriler and to much romance best bringing sum qualitys of justin out.
MORE JUSTIN TIMBERLAKE PLEASE AND MORE THRILLER STORIES
i liked the chapter when lillian and justin got together, because it was like finally after all that time she finally let her feeling go and she told him how she felt.
i loved the last part when chris and lance sent the BEAR to sing to lilly and justin.
JUSTIN!!!.lol. so yea obviously you did because he was one of the main characters.lol.
yes.lol. i think they kind of gave you a hint of what the chapter was about, and some ofthem were really nice.
nope.
i liked it all. So i think you are a very talented writer.
well this is the first storyt i have read on this site so i guess after i read a few more i'll letcha know.lol. see ya
My favorite chapter was the last one because it brng so much closure tothe story.
hmmm, I cant quit epick one out.
Justin...some parts. I think he an get stubborn, so I guess you did a pretty goo job!
Yess!!! Loved them, I actually listened to some of those songs before soI really loved it!
Nahhh, good job gurlie!
I love thatyou actually finished your story, some writers never fnish and it gets me pissed, I know that it must have ben some hard work! I wish you col have explained more so of how she looked, butits ok!!
I love the story, and I think Lily is a amazing character, I was happy that she wasnt-what you call it-slutty? lol. Good job!! Amazaing!
it was really hard to pick... but i think i liked the chapter/s on jc's party
hmmm... the water fight... the part when todd and mike (i think) pushed them in the pool
jc... yep... especially with the whole eva cassidy stuff...
yep... at first i couldn't find the connection but i did after finishing the chapters
nope... nada... nuh uh... none... get my point yet?
best: capturing the characters really well... worst: is there even?
everything's great!!!
I don't think that I have a favourite chapter. I really liked all of them.
I think the funniest moment was when they had their "water-fight".
Yes I enjoyed reading them.
I think you're good at surpising the reader.
I thought all of them were good.
lol i like the end w/ the blowup dolls
Justin and Jc.. I think u did.
not really.. i didn't know like any of them
nah.. it was overall good.
I loved the whole story. It was a little slow in the begining, but then it got really good.
I loved all the pranks that they played on each other.
Justin is my favorite member, I think you did a good job with all the characters except maybe it was a little to stero-typical
I actually ignored them for the most part. I think they distract from the story line.
Very good story, good characters and good plot.
You have a good imagination and you seemed to know what you were talking about.
I loved that your story was not just one page or a few chapters. The longer it is the better, it means that characters and plots can be more developed.
I don't really have a favorite chapter. The whole story was really good.
The water fight scene. The Joey and Chris interaction was highly amusing. You had a lot of funny moments in the story. They were nice to read. Not many authors incorperate this much humor into a romance.
Justin, of course and I think you did very well capturing his personality. I think you got all the guys down pretty well.
I love them. They all fit and it was just cool.
The only one would have to be the unnesessary mentions of Britney. Although her and Justin were together, there was really no point in including her in the story. It was just kinda out of nowhere and she didn't bring any extra drama or anything, so it was just kinda like, 'huh?'
Umm...I guess the worst quality is the fact that you dragged the story on for so long. I loved it, I honestly did, but waiting so long for them to get together or for Justin to really realize his feelings was a bit much. Other than that, I thought you were great. You have an amazing ability. You made me laugh, you made me cry, you got style and the whole intern bit makes you original because I had never read a story with a chick meeting the guys through that.
Pretty much did that above, but I will add, I loved Lillian's character, especially her name. I thought the story was great, your writing was great, everything was just great. I'm glad I found this story and this site because you're one of the rare fan fiction authors that have actually been able to provoke emotion for me. Great work! PS: You also made me curious enough to download some Eva Cassidy music and THANK YOU for that. Amazing voice.
i ABSOLOUTLY LOVED that story!!!!!!!!!
epilogue, cuz it finally put a great ending to a great story!
the funniest scene was when lily was challenged by justin in dreamcast that was priceless.
justin of course, lol, you did a wonderful job.
yup it foreshadowed wat was gona happen
nope non at all
best was how you portrayed each nsync member as i would think they are.
the website, stories, everything is absolutely amazing, you should b proud!
i dont remember the # chpater but i loved when Justin and Lillian were in the rain and he read her letter.
funniest part? the water gun fight
Justin and yes
absolutly you found quotes that perfectly described the situations
no
best:giving each character an emotional point and a scene or line that is unique to them worst: some lines were slightly corny but overall it was great
i think that if this is an insight to your other stories i will be reading them all! keep writing!
I dont really have a favorite chapter i loved the whole story
I dont really know.
Justin -Yes
Yes
Just a great story all together
its all good
I loved the whole story.
the one with the water gun fight
all of the different pranks
Lance and i hope so
ya they give kinda a cool preview
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Best- you make it realistic worst-i dunno
good job
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Uhm Chapter 32. Because Justin finally realizes all along he had feelings for lilly. Great job on the story.
All the pranks they played. it was awesome.
Justin. you did great
yeas they were awesome
no.. but i couldn't fit my site url in the box so here its is. http://amber.inthearmsof5angels.com
You could put a little more detail into the chapters.. like explaining what there doing in more words.. or describing there surroundings better. if you haven't visited this site i would recommend you did. http://www.tasting-eden.com/aura/ it gives tuns of tips.
You could do more to your home page like add blends an new layout.. if you'd like help with that stuff leave me an email or a tag on the board with your email k! You've done a geat job with you stories.. just needs a bit of work in the end!! but hey not everyone can be a writing genius.. if you read my first story Still On My Brain you'd know what im talkin about. then read something like you.. you'll see. But keep up the good work. -Amber
I've read a lot of fan ficitons in my day (sad, I know) and I can honestly say that this was one of the best ones I've read! It was well written and had a great plot. I really enjoyed it. Perhaps you could recommend other stories to me?
There was too many too name. I loved a lot of the dialogue between the guys, and the pranks were priceless!
Justin and JC are my favorites. Too be honest, I'm not sure if you captured their personalities well because I don't know them. But it's how I hope they act.
I did, yes. It made me want to go out a find those songs just so I could listen to them.
Loved it! Please 'go on wit ya bad self!' I wish you could write me a story...
i dont remember the chapter # even tho i just got finished reading it but it was in the rain scene becuase i always like the sad chapters even tho it makes me cry.
the funniest scene? hmmm.... i'm not sure....
i dont have a favorite member but i think u did great with all of their personalities
i loved the quotes at the beginnng of each chapter.... because it was creative and it went with the chapter well.
i wish u wouldve put justin and lillian together sooner....... or make ur story longer.... cuz i wanna know wut happens to them in the future....
i think ur a great writer.... no bad qualities from me.
i really love ur story..... r u going to have a sequal about justin and lillian? i hope u do.... u make them sound perfect together..... keep writing!